GM man you have the touch on that guitar!. Such warm tone and excellent finger style picking. I do hope you find some time to write some more and post on this site. I will certainly be back looking for more..

Muse-- HAPPY BIRTHDAY, man!! How are you, buddy? This is really a beautiful piece, and I can't help but hear the sound of drums crashing in and a very dynamic lead guitar! Hmmm-- I'm also hearing some hard female vocals on this..? Whatdya think, bruth?

Very nice, peaceful tune. Haunting internal melody. Well done, Very nice songwriting.

Dood, get some more stuff up for us :)

nice clean picking!! smoothe--telling a story with that six string!! you have taken me somewhere with your playing--enjoyed the ride--mark

listen to the toon make me feel, runnin' my system and start to jam. one of this "I-love-it-when-it-never-ends". timing for eternity - envy-worth.

The timing elements in this toon are very kool...as is the playing! I like the fact that you kept it very consistant throughout..ending as you started. I can hear where this toon could go....(and it's just fine the way it is) mind you. I enjoyed hearing it in this form. nice finger pickin! nice timing format!

Hey I remember that song ...real good start man ..keep up the good work

Cool stuff GM. Nicely played. Looking forward to hearing it develop.

I agree with everything that's already been said. Great start! Please don't abandon it! You don't even have to think of it as soloing. Just think of a melody to play over what you're playing in the background. Like it alot!

I'm guessing you floated this one as a work on progress. Lyrics. Bass. Drums. Yeah, those things added to the solidm foundation here would really elevate this song. love the melody and your guitar playing on this.

Hey, this is a nicely written piece and you played it well. Very nice first submission.Would love to hear it with more parts added.

The song has a rock soild foundation. I would like to hear some searing guitar leads over that then at the end continue the song by bring in drums and bass and color it with lead guitar.

agreed - very nice finger picking. Some bass would really help this tune stand out more. Glad you are starting to record!

Very cool, GM! That's some nice finger picking, too. Congratulations on your first of I hope many submissions. A great way to get it going, for sure!