Innerdream this track has potential. The guitars sound great. The drums need work but many of us are in the same boat there. Sounds too mechanical. Also try this...it is cheap but works in a bind lol. Play a bass line on your guitar and then eq it down dropping any of the highs. I used to do this before I had a bass and it fooled a lot of people ;).

Greetings I D Nice crunch on the guitars,solo was good an clean. Voxs are good just need to mix them down a little to fit better in the track an the drums down a hair. Good harmonies . Good Lyrics Over all good track Clean recording Keep up the good work. Steph