Now this is better, it satisfied my curiosity. You have created yourself a very sweet piece, simple and subtle, great sounds and some nice feels really enjoyed this piece well done

hey rich, if you don't mind i would like to say this is very nice! the guitar tone is right on, for this type of song! you got a real killer write here. i liked it very much! digger

great mood, i like the warm guitar and the melody line. Wonderful mix and great work

Very nice guitar work -- love the layering and the different tones. Each one is distinct, clear and adds to the song. Very tasty song. I think FM has a valid suggestion, regarding panning the drums, but it's very good as it is.

Wow, 3 tracks in one evening from you. I think I like this track the best of the ones you have posted. I like the mood the track sets. Drum mix on this is 100% better. The one thing I do hear in the drum track is the hi hat, you may want to pan that slightly to one side along with the crash cymbals, they sound as if they are dead center currently. Otherwise I think it was a very good track, everything seemed to sit in the mix well on this. FM

This was short but extremely sweet. I'd like to hear the full length version. It does make me want to hear a bit more of your stuff

Hello again Richard, Drums on this track are much better, especially the kick, it is sounding less muddy here. The track is a bit short, maybe add a change in the track to break it up a bit. Overall production on the track is not bad. Sounds like a good foundation for something. FM

Great atmosphere is in this track - a story without words. Haunted!

Man this is a sweet piece. This has just the right amount of delay to my ears. It just gives it that cool feel. Kind of short though! I was hoping this would continue! I would possibly add it as an intro to another song!

I agree its a little off the wall but its very interesting, it makes you hang around to see whats coming next! Darren

I liked this because it was kind of off the wall! Not sure how you are getting those tones but very cool!

Once again, short yet effective. great little jam, one that could have been longer well done

Richard, I can easily tell by listening that you have a great command of the fretboard and you do it in such a melodic way. I wanted this one to go on and on and on. Excellent fretboard mastery!

hi richard,good jam,nice vibrato and very good feel to your playing.keep jamming... soul release

Hi Richard - looking forward to hearing the final on this - keep me posted.