This is nice, As with previous comments, it is hard to pick out certain points. But to be constructive, you have a very good voice. With more work in the recording department, or maybe even a couple of collaborations with fellow artists here. You could really begin to bring out the obvious potential. I wish you well in all you do

Emotionally this is very good. I also think the voice is attractive. A couple of setbacks though. First the melody is a bit plain and lacks a climax, second, your recording volume is too low. Nice effort overall.

I really like your vocals. You sound like you really mean what you're singing. Could you post the lyrics? I'm having a hard time understanding what you're saying. Sounds like you're recording guitar and vocal together, so sonically they can get mixed up sometimes. Good start.

Nice song. Lovely vocals and good lyrics. Maybe a picked accompaniment in places would add to the effect. Good stuff!

You sound more comfortable singing this song. Again, I'm very impressed with your lyrics. Very deep and meaningful. Nice vocal work on this song as well.

Agreed Selftort! This song flows a lot easier that the other. The vocals do not sound forced.

Not pointess at all. Very poignant song. I think I prefer the melodic content of this song to the earlier one. There's a real depth of feeling in this one. Again, your voice comes over really wsll and the guitar seems more supportive of the mood of the song. The chord inversions on the intro and verse are really very nice. You could probably record these a little louder. They're much quieter than the majority of tracks here.

I agree with Dazed. It's going in the right direction, but it still needs to be more polished. Part of it is the lyrical meter in some of the lines. As I said on your other songs, I really like your vocals, but I think you need to polish up the lyrics more so they flow better with the music. Don't get me wrong, I think you're on the right track, just keep working it.

I absolutely love the lyrics to this song. Unusual but pretty cool.

Charming song with lovely vocal performance. The chord structure is fairly simple but you've extracted a very appealing melody from it. The guitar playing's fine but I'm not sure if it's the right style for this song. It's fairly static strumming that reinforces the simplicity of the chord progression. Personally I think the verse section would benefit from a picking style with the strummining then coming in on the chorus. That would also put more of a spotlight on the chorus. Very nice piece of work Cheers Brian

Hey Britt welcome to iMS :) I like the tune and I think it is going in the right direction. I am not sure if this is a work in progress or a final. I like the changes you did around the 3:00 mark. I would almost bring some changes in earlier. How was this recorded?

My wife thinks I'm okay, I think. Just wondering, what is your goal here? I think you have a good voice, but the song doesn't sound finished yet. Being a guy, not sure I like the idea of the song, but I do think there's potential in what you're doing.

Hey, I resemble that remark! I like your vocal approach to this. I like the melody as well. There was a little glitch or two but hey, maybe you didn't do 47 takes like some of us do. hehe Keep 'em coming.