Lyrical Princess
Lyrical Princess
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CARRY ME THROUGH

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By: Lyrical Princess
Posted in: Poetry/Lyrics
CARRY ME THROUGH

 

 CARRY ME THROUGH

Are you up there..
Can you see me.. ?
I'm down here crying
Do you hear my plea ?

You seem so distant
No place around
I pray that one day
I'll feel peace abound

I look everywhere
Hoping you'll see
I'm down here trying
Giving the best of me

I need your presence
You by my side
To keep believing
You are my guide

Still looking around
Where can you be
I need your love
To set me free

So let the sun set
And moonbeams shine
And carry me through
This terrible time

I hope you hear me
And see my pain
Without you with me
There's nothing to gain

©Copyright 2011/Linda Fry

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08/13/11 12:05:43PM @:
I TOTALLY felt your pain and honesty in these words. Sometimes we feel like no one hears us or answers our calls for help, but God always does & that is a guarantee. This is quite beautiful in how you poured your soul into these words. Much respect to you for that...just beautiful!
WhereWolf
08/12/11 09:26:15PM @tlt50:
Awesome.....Babe....:))))
Farrell Jackson
08/12/11 08:22:35PM @farrell-jackson:
Linda, with your permission of course, I would like to use these words for one of the new Rayon Vert songs. Your words are very heartfelt and beautiful and yes they are very spiritual in nature...that's what makes them so wonderful....they are like a spontaneous prayer....very moving.

I just wanted to place my bid before the other songwriters take notice. Remember, I asked first, lol.

Let me know.

Farrell

songdoc
08/12/11 07:23:32PM @david-c-deal:
yummy Linda.... true words from the heart of spiritual despair. love this stuff
Tommie Brewster
08/13/11 11:28:58AM @tommie-brewster:
Hi Linda.........I think your lyrics are actually quite haunting and express very deep feelings.
Is this intended as a poem, a spoken word or to be a song? I think that would determine whether I would change one or two of the words to scan to a rhythm ........
But very nice.
The song would be just acoustic guitar or piano I think - very simple.
xxx
Tommie

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